Nathan Wyatt: February 2012

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Looking over your blog, I am pleased that you have made a really good start on all Evaluation questions Nathan
There are some good attempts to make posts visual in some way, and your written comments show a generally good grasp of what each question requires of you

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To improve, and move that standard of your work towards a B-A grade, you should come back to your posts and continue to develop them Nathan.
I checked Q. 3 and 5 carefully, as these were the 2 that we agreed on in last Monday's lesson. There are some developments that I'd like you to do to improve each...
Q. 3 is currently Very Good, but should be moved to 'Excellent' through the inclusion of screen grabs from your own film sequence compared to similar films released by the same distribution company - your written comments should explain what they share in common, and why your film is best suited to the company you selected
Q. 5 - I am not a huge fan of Bubble for A Level work Nathan... at least, not on its own for a post. It really is 'just' a spider diagram. Q. 5 is ideal for images of your target audience - surely?? You mention that you seek to appeal to 'middle class' males - SHOW the type of person you have in mind. Create a detailed profile of the 'typical' person you would hope would go and see your film (age, gender, income, interests, other films they enjoy... etc...) Make this post more interesting and creative by including some key shots from your film that you designed to appeal to your audience. You also mention the 'damsel in distress' and refer to Nicole being tied up, etc... - SHOW images from your film - make your post interesting Nathan.

Overall effort for Q. 3 and 5: GD - with IN (improvement needed)